I loved Adam's story. At first I couldn't understand why Adam would just up and leave Tanya like that but as the story went on I began to understand. I'm glad things turned out alright for everybody in the end. You're OC was really well written and I enjoyed her very much. You've definitely got some real talent. :)

wow... and that's all I have to say on this. Wow. But it's a good wow. Wow for how well you described everything, really brought me in this story. Wow for the ending.

*hugs you*

wow...

Oh my god that was so good, excellent job. I loved it.

OMG YOU FINALLY FINISHED IT! YAY! This is was seriously, AMAZING! ^__^

I loved it! ^^ Great job! Yay!

As a chapter, this is fantastic. As a culmination, this is perfect.

(Todah rabah, for writing all of this.)

-Stefanie

Well, first of all, congradulations on finally finishing!

I liked this, well, all of Aftermath really, and I'm not sure why. It's not the sort of thing I usually read, but somehow it's grown on me. Adam's relationship with Jamie seems almost random at times, but I'm sort of fond of it, too.

-Shrugs- Will you an accept a cheesy and completely unhelpful 'Good story?'

Hmm, interesting. Not at all what I expected, but very well done. Strangely weird and still in character for Adam.

That was so...is 'poignant' the right word here? I feel like it's what I want to say; there seemed to be echoes of 'On the Road'. Have you read that book perchance? I feel the key feature of this piece was Adam's journey; the driving emotion was palpable in your writing.

I rarely read het but can appreciate the romance of this fic too.

Thank you for sharing this very moving piece.

Just realized, yes, this was updated. :)

It fits for her, and I loved the use of song lyrics interspersed. Can 't wait for Adam's, but then. He always was one of my favorites.

-Stefanie

Okay, so that was ... different. Fits with Tanya's character, sure, but I guess I'm missing the introspection, for want of a better word, that was in earlier chapters. To be honest, it seems like an opening to something else, or perhaps more, and I'm left feeling ... not cheated, exactly, but more left WANTING.

Still well done, though. :)

Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.

Oh. My. God. My favorite piece in this series. After re-discovering Power Ranger, I've found a whole lot of affection for Rocky that I didn't have growing up. This is so painful. I'd love to see what else you do with Rocky's character.

That was so sad. I feel for Rocky. Its an interesting take to express the resentment not for the newcommers, but the ones who left. It makes sense honestly. Very moving, and thought provoking. Excellent.

That had me sniffling. Very moving. I think it was perfect that he could be buried on both planets he called home. Wonderful.

Another deep story. It's interest how Zack still automatically goes into battle dance. It shows that somethings become so ingrained they are hard to break. You portrayed the depth of his feelings well. Excellent story.