AWESOME i read every bit. u could fee3l what they were thinking and feeling

I must tell you have a great skill to get in character's minds. And the chapters were short but intenses. Good work!

that's a wise "speech" from Jean

Wen

Well in this episode in which Scott has been able to take off his shades he could have made or said something more intelligent than "Oh, see what's the boy has made" Dammed it lol

Wen

Jamie is a strong boy. I just read all off the chapter. I haven't gotten to read all your stories so don't be mad at me if I have only reviewed a few of them. Is there going to be a X23 Look in the mirror too, and a Brotherhood. I like the way you do it. It makes you see past everything and it shows what they really feel. Keep up the good work!

vince is such a sweetie...*sigh*

Lonna: It's ok Jamie! We all still love you!

ME: Hey, let me write a review!

Lonna: No! He's my best friend! Go away!

thats kinda scary when you think about it.

the was a good chapter. i like the thought you put into jaime

this is so sad. Poor kurt.

you can tell who the chapter is about, even before reading the name. Each chapter changes acroding to each persons point of view. Jeans is all, friends oriented, while logans was mostly tough guy oriented. What I'm trying to say it, this is very good writting

Poor scott. Hes like colorblind. That would suck so much!

I liked the last line. You capture the essesnce of the characters so well. how do you do it?

oh, this is wonderful! This is exactly how rogue would think if she was a real person

wow! This fict has an amazing consept! Its so origanal, and original is so important for good fictts! Is vincent and OC?