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Reviews for: Goodbye to the Past
OfficiallyObsessedwithPyro 3/30/04 . chapter 1
YAY! *happy dance* he came back! he came back! Yay! Yay!
Nabob 3/29/04 . chapter 1
OMG! DOES ANYONE HAVE A TISSUE? REALLY?
HELLO!
I.SAID.DOES.ANYONE.HAVE.A.TISSUE!
wow, all-chan that was beautiful, just beautiful.
however, the ending seemed a little rushed, man, if you ended it at "She hardly even noticed she'd completed her assignent." I really would be crying.
Ya, so the only (VERY MINOR) problem thingy was the rushed ending, you needed to stretch it out just a WEE bit longer.
But who the hell cares? It was AWSOME, and that poem was...well WOW.
lmao, luv ya n miss ya ally-chan, keep it up!
bob-chan
Echo in the Dark 3/22/04 . chapter 1
*sniff* that was beutiful! i loved it to much. i must come and read again and again. thank u for such a beutiful poem. great job on ur work.
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