 Nabob 3/29/04 . chapter 1OMG! DOES ANYONE HAVE A TISSUE? REALLY?
HELLO!
I.SAID.DOES.ANYONE.HAVE.A.TISSUE!
wow, all-chan that was beautiful, just beautiful.
however, the ending seemed a little rushed, man, if you ended it at "She hardly even noticed she'd completed her assignent." I really would be crying.
Ya, so the only (VERY MINOR) problem thingy was the rushed ending, you needed to stretch it out just a WEE bit longer.
But who the hell cares? It was AWSOME, and that poem was...well WOW.
lmao, luv ya n miss ya ally-chan, keep it up!
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