sorry couldn't be bothered logging in, but I love it is hilarious, great use of conciousness and reminds me of the book umm, ok can't remember the books name but it was great and hilarious

is it possible that you were high on weed when u wrote this...

That was hella funny. lol. all my friends are cracking up and we cant breathe because we are laughing so bloody hard. hahahahaha! Anyhoo... I was kinda exagerating there. That was hella good. Is there a next chapter, or does it just end there? Hmm? if there is a next chappie planned, UPDATE, DAMMIT! if there isn't, then... well... leave me in pain waiting for grease to conquer the world. lol.^^

~Neferkhet

MWAHAHAHAHA! HAHAHAH! BWAHAHAH!

*attempts to say how good the story is, but fails, on account of laughing*

hmm... as i have NEVER seen invador zim... i'm going to make a random guess...

Is it the grease?

The humor within this fic is reminiscent of Douglas Adams. Considering he's a published author, one does wonder if insanity is catching by reading.

I'll be insane by tomorrow since I've read this more than once. :)

Lady Galaxy (LG): ^_^ Random odd-ness. Always fresh! ^_^
Amara: Awesome...
LG: Must... update...
Angel Galaxy (Angel): *poof* WAIT! If you update one of your fanfics now, there will be a huge, terrible accidebt in Norway!
Evil Galaxy (Evil): *poof* Yes, but if you don't someone's computer will crash.
LG: O_O;
Angel: If you wait 5 minutes, 3 people will get locked out of their house.
LG: That happened to me once...
Evil: If you wait 24 hours, a war will start.
LG & Amara: O_O;

um @.@ that was, odd, um (gasp) Cheese!
*eats it* Yum

Now signedin. The chaos theory is in that particular science of non-existant things. Like Bigfoot, and Spotaneous Combustion.
Wait. I already mentioned that.
Anyways you changed your user page. It's more funny now. Saying stuff like how it doesn't sound like you. It does. You just made me feel like laughing because the way you were talking is unlike your crazy self. It must be the talking in the third person thing. I should try that. No wait I did before. Then I should do it more often. The third person thing is what makes things funny.
I know how this should be one shot, but PLEASE do another chapter. I wanna see how the others respond. Like Anzu. She'd be killing herself trying to save everyone from having bad things happen to them.
But the thing is every second of the day there's always one bad thing happening. Whether it's something deadly or not. For every good thing that happens, something bad happens. That's just the way the world is.
But you, like all our other friends see the world, each at a different...well I guess I could say 'angle'.
If you could make it not a -One Shot- fic that'd be great. It was so insanly stupid that it was funny.
As I type this somewhere out there something has died. But as one thing loses life, another is born. And I got this tidbit of wisdom from garth Nix in his the Seventh Tower series. Milla the Icecarl is so strange...
Bye bye flaed(I dunno if I should call you sempai or not since you refuse to disclose your age).

ZIM! I LOVE YOU!
Actually, two things came to mind while reading.
1. the grease from "Germs" at the restaurant
2. Ms. Bitters= Ms. Quodlibet
That was a great story. I'm having a fun time envisioning two halves of Change of Heart on Bakura's shoulder. Hehe.
:-)

That was... interesting. Actually, it was really funny. It was the kind of story that has you 'sweatdropping' half the time, and laughing hysterically the other half. in other words, it was good. in other words, WRITE MORE! Oh, something I felt like telling you. Did you know that the Normans were responsible for making the legal drinking age 21? Yet another thing that you can blame them for. Anyway, have fun writing!

Flaed, you've done it again! I laughed so hard, I CRIED!
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[I've figured out how to make myself cry. You keep your eyes open for a REALLY, REALLY long time, and then... encourage the tears to fall, sort of. Watch...
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Me (watching TV): (sob) (sob) (sniffle) IT'S SO SA-A-A-A-A-A-AD!
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Socman: O_O Tamara... why are you crying over a Kaiba brothers flashback scene?
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Me: (sob) (sob) I'm not! (starts laughing hysterically)]
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So, anyhow, after that highly outlandish and rather curious glimpse into the daily absurdities of my life...
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I don't know WHERE you come up with this stuff, and, hey, I'm not complaining about such high-caliber humor. Doing so would be like complaining about... oh, I dunno, WATER, or something.
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THE BURGERS! THE CLIFFS! THE INSANE TEACHERS! THE ALMIGHTY CHAOS THEORY! I swear... you should try to attract the attention of a TV studio, or Hollywood, or something... No. Hollywood’s not fit to lick your shoes. Those morons have a huge vat of perverted ideas, and every time they feel the need to amuse themselves, they reach in and pull one out.
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YOU, on the other hand, have the dialogue, the wit, the irony, the satire, the sadism, the slapstick, the recurring humor, the skepticism, and the originality, not to mention the characters, the plot, the comprehension, and the coherency. And your writing style is easily identifiable - only in a Flaed fic would a one-winged Change of Heart shoulder angel proclaim, “No, wait, someone was sucking on a Root Beer Dumdum and adverted the catastrophe.

that was stupid, but it was hilarious. Do you right any other slightly more funny stories?

NO! Grease won't rule the world, BUNNIES WILL! MWAHAHAHAHAHA!

(blink) (blink) (blink) I LOVE IT!! ! ! ! ! The . . . . sheer randomness! It's so pointless! It sounds like something I WOULD WRITE! o.o It is as I suspected . . . YOU ARE STEALING MY GOOD WRITING SPIRITS! ! ! ! ! ! ! CURSE YOU! ! ! ! ! ! ! (gets out knife)
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Demon Mouself: (poof!) Wait! If you stab her, a thousand howler monkeys will kill and eat an innocent bystander in Japan!
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Mouself: o_O Eh?
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Angel Mouself: (poof!) But if you don't, fifteen rabid koalas will be sent to Mars!
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Mouself: And I care why?
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Angel Mouself: (blink) . . . Good point. STAB! (fanged grin)
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Mouself: =.=
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Demon Mouself: STABSTABSTABSTAB! ! ! ! (bites random squirrel)
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Mouself: o.O (shrug) (stabs)
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Angel Mouself: o.o
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Demon Mouself: o.o
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Mouself: . . . What?
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Angel Mouself: The timing just changed . . .
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Mouself: So . . .
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*Somewhere in Morocco*
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Random Guy: I suddenly feel the overwelming urge to "It's a Small World" while throwing acidic daisies to the King of Spain. (goes to do so)
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*Back in Revoo*
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Mouself: o.o Erm . . .

The stupidity! It burns! XD! THIS STORY ROCKS! Really, you should continue this!