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| tatumli 2004-07-20 ch 1,  | abusegood one and i like the ending poem, we all feel like this at times and you describe it very well. |
| Daidouji-Hiiragizawa 2004-04-09 ch 1, | abuseaww.. that was so nice..^^ hope you'll write more!^.^ |
| Aqua Blue 2004-03-31 ch 1, | abuseVery good fic, I loved the way you put her thoughts. It would have been cool if we saw the Hiiragizawa side of this, too. =) *Aqua Blue |
| Haina 2004-03-27 ch 1, | abuseThis was lovely, simply lovely. |
| Pinboo 2004-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi! I really like your writing style! Espescially when you write in Tomoyo's POV... Geez, I really like this story. Has much more meaning than it first seems to be... |
| aq2lvme 2004-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseomfg... that was like... damn... i am... speechless... it was just so... beautiful... sniff T.T such a touching story... i think you're my fave author now, yup ^_^ am anxiously waiting for your next story, please do write more! i love your way with words |
| starnightdreams 2004-03-22 ch 1, | abuse~OMG~ It's so great! I wish I could write more like you... This is so sweet... I hope to read more storys and poems from you soon.. |
| Ofi 2004-03-22 ch 1, | abusei really enjoyed it though was a bit confused on why you put the poem at the end but it i really liked it. I loved how you did Tomoyo's thoughts it was like peeking in her mind. |
| To: Shima and Tempis 2004-03-22 ch 1, anon. | abusethere were TOO MANY hiiragizawa's. i mean, it's like you can't even write a single sentence without the "hiiragizawa". i think i sort of understand why you put that in but it was just too much. it's kind of irritating. i'm sorry but i think you tried too hard to make daidouji sound sarcastic. And another thing, i suggest you sort your thoughts out first before writing because the thoughts in your fic was kind of jumbled. they were not presented well. first she was a flightless bird, then she's a porcelain doll, suddenly she's a porcelain bird, then she becomes a flightless porcelain doll! come on, have a bit of consistency, flow of thoughts, anything! please don't take this review badly though... i hope you'll consider this as more of a constructive criticism. |
| ekimozo (not logged in) 2004-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so sweet...and kawaii...and just great! |
| Cherry Blossom 2004-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI kno itz cheezy but still... It waz beautiful Im not sure why. but this fanfic waz touching my heart in some way or the other. Pleaz continue to write more fics like this, Ja Ne :) |
| Sylphina 2004-03-21 ch 1, | abusePhenomenal. May the wind carry this review to you. I'm a translator. I also own a french fanfictions website. See me coming ? May I have the permission to translate this piece of art to show it's beauty to people who cannot read english ? Answer me, I beg you. My email you may find anywhere here. |
| Fuuruma 2004-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI liked very much^^, I love it, is excellent, precious... |
| TaKat (from fictionpress) 2004-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, I loved to poem~~ The doll was very nice, all the things that were someohow all linked together! Writer more! |
| Simplicity 2004-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abusekool. i loved this so very much. every time it was her thoughts, the way you wrote them out and described them was beautiful. i wish to see more of this fanfic and the style is your very own. its like no other ive seen before on ffnet. i hope you continue this fic :D |