Wow, really well done. Kudos to you ^_^ It was made all the more sad because I happened to be listening to In the Arms of the Angels by Sarah McLauchlan while I was reading it. Going on my favs list.

Very intensive...I just read Kaine yesterday and it is twisted and freaky...and the question if I have understood it is another...I can only say Kaori Yuki at her best...and you´re a great writer...I have always the fear that ffwriter may destroy her wonderful work but with writers like you this fandom is save...

It was CRAP! Even though I didn't read it.
What the HELL, is up with the end, "...Won't it?" what is that, what the HELL, does it mean?

It's so great to see Kaine fanfic! I adore that manga... it made me cry at the end, heh. it was my favourite after Ludwig Kakumei.

Anywho, a great piece here... very atmospheric and well written! Well done!

I hope you write some more Kaine stuff in the future!

~Hwoarang Girl

nicley done. i'm very happy to see some work for this manga. kaori Yukis work is amazing and the art is stunning. by the way she also did count cain, another dark, angsty and incestuous series and the art (especially in the later books like 6 and 7) is stunning. you should check it out. however (last time i checked) wasn't hosting any more scans so you may want to change that. good story and very in charecter.

hehe... finally a Kaine fic!! Nice one... and I'd like a story on Shinobu too... (right? I forgot names easily) Looking forward to more of your works!!