| Reviews for Sleeping Beauty: A Fractured Fairy Tale |
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Ashlyn 2/21/10 . chapter 1 this story i to long u need to shortin it i mean that is alot for a kid to bring to school and read we have 30 mins a peice so that would take me a day so stop being hared headed and comeon and get me a good short story |
SweetAnnitta190 11/30/09 . chapter 7 I love your story! it's great...but sometimes i get confused with the names. Overall, i think it's really GREAT :) |
noname00 8/27/08 . chapter 7 usually a disney remake is just like the original with some minor twist here and there but your fic was completely different and i must admit that i simply loved it |
weland 12/13/07 . chapter 5I'm impressed. I generally eschew all alternate pairings, but I am enjoying your stories very much. I've also been impressed by the relative lack of errors and the delicious irony of the "villain" playing the "hero fighting all obstacles to get to the princess's side". I especially liked your phrase "sub-par villain" (though that was in a previous chapter). I am confused by one thing in this chapter. There is no description of Enishi going from kill-the-princess-mode to Houston-we-have-a-problem,-my-sweetheart-is-the-pr incess-I've-sworn-to-murder. So much potential angst! It would have been such a great moment, and I was completely thrown when it was not there and there had been no mention of his discovery that the princess and his lady-love were the same person. |
Daisy's Blog 12/17/06 . chapter 7Ah! This is so sweet! _ |
Daisy's Blog 12/17/06 . chapter 3um, how'd sou-chan change to Jiro? Or are they the same? Love the fanfic. fluff! |
BelleDayNight 7/30/06 . chapter 7I loved Enishi's comment about the sniper with a crossboy being able to take people out! HAHAH! And Saitou is awesome, that sounds just like the tactics he would use to keep power and control. And the image of Sano with a cane is hillarious. I'm sure has used them on occasion, he is rather accident prone. |
BelleDayNight 7/30/06 . chapter 6I absolutely adore Aoshi...have I mentioned that? |
BelleDayNight 7/30/06 . chapter 5woah! Dont kill her enishi! Save the day Aoshi! I would so choose Aoshi to be my champion! |
BelleDayNight 7/30/06 . chapter 4Possession of her body to make her touch the spindle certainly makes sense. Crazy Enishi. |
BelleDayNight 7/30/06 . chapter 3Poor Jiro! His hopes crushed! Enishi better not destroy his own chance for happiness! |
BelleDayNight 7/30/06 . chapter 2Oh the ironicness of it all. I was wondering how Kenshin would enter the picture. Man...I sure would love to crawl into bed with aoshi...hehe. Um...oh yeah, you dont have to call 911 after all, apparently i'm still alive. |
BelleDayNight 7/30/06 . chapter 1Hehehe...I am laughing so hard at Sanosuke,Aoshi, and Soujiro as fairies...LOL! I can't believe I haven't read this story sooner. I may die of laughter before finishing...so if you dont get any more reviews after this...call 911! |
Garowyn 2/20/06 . chapter 7Good work! I enjoyed this one, too. |
yvie 11/19/05 . chapter 7This is an extremely well planned and well written fanfic. The language is good; the characterization is good; the roles given to the gang are appropriate and apt. It is a wonderful mixture of Sleeping Beauty and Rurouni Kenshin. The thing I love most about this story is the grand irony surrounding the relationship between Kaoru and Enishi. It is vastly amusing for me as I read on and discover that the person Enishi wants to kill and the person that taught to love is the same one. The best bit definitely is when he was about to kill Kaoru but instead woke her up. I mean, he literally had her life in his power. I cannot praise this fanfic enough. It is seriously the best. I also enjoyed the Snow White one that you wrote with Enishi in his original crime-lord role, but this one is my favourite! |