T_T insert crying here.

it was so beautiful.

This is so sad. The writing style is so cool, makes me wanna jack it! (jkjk!) The ending was the definetely the best i've got today, arigatou, for the sad, sad story...

Wow that was soo cute. One sided convos wer kwl but a bit confussin at times...but I liked it :P Poor shinji..dead!?!aw he really does luv kaworu. Well dun and fanx.
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Very interesting style that was written in. I could tell who everyone was, just from the way things were worded and bits of description. It was sparse, but intentionally so, and it worked well. The only parts I found confusing was when conversations were one sided. But I think that's inevitable.

Nice fic ^_^. A bit too short, but nice :D. Kep up good work :)!

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