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| SarahKathryn 2008-06-04 ch 6,  | abuseno happy ending :( but really well written, i liked it very much |
| LifesVictory 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abuseNice job on this piece. I think what I like best about it is the way you've maintained the normalcy of the case for the team instead of focusing too much on just Jack and Sam, which sometimes becomes my flaw when I get too distracted. Although JUST J/S is a great way to sort of give yourself some freedom, keeping it real with the actual televised storyline is even harder, and you've accomplished this masterfully. Good work :) |
| Melanie-Anne 2004-06-26 ch 6, | abuseThis was a great story, I loved it. And I'm glad you ended it with some hope for Sam and Jack. |
| Mariel3 2004-06-25 ch 6, | abuseThis was a great way to end the story. You wrapped everything up (not necessarily as expected, which makes it all the nicer) beautifully, and left me with a feeling of 'reader satisfaction'. The last interaction with Jack and Samantha was especially appealing to any and all J/Sers! Nice job! |
| Evidence 2004-06-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseWow!! Excellent job! I'm so impressed with your skill at writing. |
| Caia 2004-06-12 ch 5, | abuseOK!! I liked it... poor Danny, and I loved how you showed how Jack felt... it was really good, now please update soon! |
| midnightcaller 2004-06-12 ch 5, anon. | abuseWow, awesome description and you created a wonderful sense of atmosphere!! So sad, too, please continue soon! |
| Mariel3 2004-06-12 ch 5, | abuseOh, we liked it! The description you put into your writing really helps build the story. The understated interaction between Samantha and Jack was nicely done, and I cna't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for posting! |
| Tannash 2004-06-05 ch 4, | abuseWow. Please update this soon. I've only just got into the show but this story is great. Please write more really soon. |
| Caia 2004-06-03 ch 4, | abuseHey. that's great! Who got shot? Who got shot? ... :D |
| SurfaGrl87 2004-06-02 ch 4, anon. | abuseDude! What an excellent fanfic! (/Bill and Ted) Wow what a story! It is really good, but eek what a cliffhanger. Now you must UPDATE SOON or I fear we might drive ourselves mad! |
| Obsidian 2004-06-02 ch 4, anon. | abuseWow. What a cliffhangar. I'm loving this story! Great casefile and intriguing character interactions. In particular, I can't wait to see where you take Jack and Sam. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| ladylampetia 2004-06-02 ch 4, | abuseSo well-written! I love it! Please keep going. I want to see what happens next! :D |
| Little Webby 2004-06-02 ch 4, | abuseWOW! What a cliff-hanger! I have just read all 4 chapters and think that they are all great. Please post more REALLY soon, I have to know what happens! LittleWebby x |
| Mariel3 2004-04-25 ch 3, | abuseI really liked that last scene with Vivian on the riverbank. Wonderful, thoughtful way to end the chapter! The tension between Jack and Samantha is interesting - it'll be even more interesting to see how or if it's resolved! Thanks for posting! |