Good story, after all Carmelita can't be ALL bad can she? I liked the ending especially. And the description of Mr Poe: 'a random coughing guy', it is rather accurate!
'Tis a rather weird ship, but you made it work very well. Congratulations!

-Gabriel

That was really good! I like stories from the other point of view.

mE GO POOPY.

I really liked This one!
its nice!
i didn't know britny dated Justin,but shes lesbian, shes kissing Christina agelara and other woman!
and when i say kissing, i mean KISSING!
Heres a link!

Ithink it is really good. It gets a bit confusing but I love. Please reply through a review

::claps:: I loved the story! Its seem likes something that would happen in real life like you are mean to someone you like just to be with your friends and if they find out, you may not have any friendz anymorez,so...yea great story!

oh my god that was sso good! and i absolutely love the song you used! quite frankly, it's playing in the background right now! eekk... the song was perfect, you wrote it good... hahah! continue plz!

Omigod... You actually made that believable...and good...omigod...i'm shocked... YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER!
~Nari Motoori~
ps. OMIGOD! I never knew that ships was from relationships! How slow am i?? lol!! Great story
pps. You are the best writer
ps. I wish I could manage to read all of ur stories but u hav too many...lol
ps. LOVED IT!!

brill freakin' ant! I love this story. It seems so real. ~Favorited~

me dunno... goodie! goodie!

:o that was my weird ship i was gunna write.. oh well you posted it first..im gunna change it round and its not during TAA so dont get mad at me for copying... if iever get round to typing it up.. sorry if you do think im copying.. good story btw

You picked a pretty unbelievable ship and made it seem plausible! Good stuff!

Good job you made it really seem that Carmelita was never the bad guy like this was a real part of TAA
good job
I luv it
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