I love it!! I offer a bit of advice, someone offered the same to me, perhaps it would help if you separate the first paragraph into smaller ones? It would be a little easier to read!!

But other than that, wonderful job!!

next chapter? maybe?

Lovely story. However, I have an edit--whenever the speaker changes in a story, you start a new paragraph. It's probably been said before--lovely story anyway.

~Penelope

Another awesome story. I hope you will think about adding more. I like the Eowyn & Legolas pairing. My first fic with the pairing and it was an AWESOME story. Keep up the great work!

I love this story. Please continue.

AWW! This was so sweet and touching!! I loved it! I love Legolas/Eowyn fics! My only problem was that I wish the first paragraph could be split into 2 paragraphs. it was kinda long and i had trouble finding my place sumtimes. other than that, I LOVED IT!! Great job!
-Nirithiel

An interesting pair that I never would have thought of... but still interesting.
One note, it would be easier to read if you broke up the main block into smaller paragraphs. thanks, and while I like this as a one shot, keep writing! -Miran

This story is wonderful! I also think Eowyn and Legolas would be a good couple. Keep writing. God Bless!