Uwah! Does this mean Goten-chan gets to be the Rave Master? That would be coolies, cause I love Goten and Haru! Is there any hope of convinsing you to continue the story?

That was really good. I love the idea and the plot line is really original. I liked what was here and I think you should make anothr story that takes place right after this one, because I find it really interesting. And because Chibi Trunks and Goten are cute!
-Yonk