I really love your story! Keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next chapter!

You have a good story going here. I read it a couple days ago, but couldn't log in to review, because fanfiction was doing it's update thing. It would be wrong of someone to assume its a Mary-Sue just because you have an OC with a unique name. It take more than that to make a Mary Sue! So no worries! Keep going!

anyway i think this story is good. whoever flamed you is a complete idiot.

wow...write more soon...

this is fun. keep it up!

Nicely done! Not the genre of story I would normally read--really good OFCs (original female characters) are so few and far between--but this one is well-written and intriguing, with an in-character and amusing Jack.

Your Aurolyn could easily have become a Mary Sue--especially with that ornate name of hers--but doesn't seem to be. The pejorative term "Mary Sue" applies to stories focusing on a gorgeous, irresistible, poorly-written OFC who usually represents nothing more than a clumsy self-insertion on the part of the author. Such fics are by definition badly written, and usually the canon characters are just as poorly drawn as the originals.

Now if Jack had fallen hopelessly in love with your Aurolyn at that first meeting and settled down with her in a homey little cottage by the sea at story's end, or she had hinted at some kind of mysterious and painful past, or was actually a mermaid, or a better pirate than Jack Sparrow, or was accompanied by a talking tiger named Serena, then you'd be in trouble. (If you think I made up that last example, check out the merciless skewering of some truly awful PotC Sues by the lovely Megan@Midnight.) Instead, Aura seems to be reasonably human, snarky and a bit of a stick, and not haunted by fractured grammar or gaping plot holes, and we'd all really like to know whether she is Jack's daughter or not...so keep writing!

ARGH ! is she really jack's daughter? wooa that's good ..héhéhhé ...good story very good story..plz keep on writing

i was almost hopin she wasn't, that means no romance. o well, this is a very good story, love how ur writing it, good mystery n'everything.

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Daughter? Ha, I doubt that. ::.Scowls at Anamaria.:: Interfering wench. No, I didn't mean it! I like Anamaria!
On other subjects...
Heh heh... Joshamee... ::.Giggles.:: Poor Gibbs. I actually prefer his last name, and that's saying a lot. Anyway, update quickly!

First of all...people flame *you?* Is that even possible? What's wrong with these stories? I adore them...
Anyways!
I really love how they're both far too hungover to possibly rememeber each other, and how you included Ana in this chapter. Great writing as always, I'm going to hurry and finish this review so that I can read the next chapter!

Haha! I didn't know that anyone could write Jack Sparrow so well! He's perfectly drunk and silly, and poor, poor Aurolyn seems to be a little confused.
My favorite line...
"Pirates drank rum, did they not?"
She's so prim and silly! I really love her, and I love how this first chapter was completely centered around them, with the scenery being eased in.

This is good. Keep writing.

the plot thickens! again and again, this is a really good plot, and i really like how you write jack. i cant wait to find out whats going on , with rose and everything *hint hint*

Flashback frenzy! Heheh...
Wonderful job on this chapter! Hopefully next time you'll have more Aurolyn/Jack, that'd be really cool... keep it up!

lovely, just lovely, please update again soon!
oh and check out my story and review please!
much love
Camilla