Fantastic! I loved Ginny in your story, really. She's not my fav character in books but reading this... Good work!

I'm going to review this all at once just for ease

Chapter 1

this is a very honest Ginny

much more so than what is ordinarily seen

and her view of Harry and the way she doesn't love him are very realistic

almost painfully so

Chapter 2

Ginny's name isn't Virginia, it's Ginvera

the diction in this one is particularly good

and it's so sad

Gin and Tonic is so very depressing

but it's so fresh and raw and addicting

Chapter 3

I think this one shows the best pathos

every girl's been where Ginny was

needing exactly what the boy can't offer

and not sure why she can't just be happy with obvious perfection

Chapter 4

this is so sad

but so true to both JKR's characters and the characters you've built throughout this story

I love Dean and I hate to see him bashed

but you do it well

so it's ok

Chapter 5

I love this one

Ginny's so angry and self serving

and Draco's just Draco

and the end just cheers the feminist in me

the flow of conciousness just keeps getting better throughout the chapters

Chapter 6

and the ending was perfect

Sirius finding someone to trust

and Ginny finding someone to love

I don't normally go for happy endings

but this is very nice

overall

well thought out and it flows wonderfully from one chapter to the next

kudos

All in all this is an okay fic, but Ginny's full name is GINEVRA! If you like the books enough to write a fanfic about them, at leas get the names right.

Whoa...well if that isn't just a whole new take on our favourite she-weasel...

Sheer bloody brilliance

Peace out

TSD

wow.. you have a great writing style and i love the way you've made the sotry match up to jk rowling's work

if you don't become famous i will be surprised

i love writing and i get quite good grades in english but i think you are better than me and good luck in your future (u dnt really need it though)

keep writing!

a fan,

Nettra

Excellent story!

SIRIUS! *wakes up and swoons again* Hm...can this be happiness? *gasp* Surely not...there is no such thins...happiness? *shifty, nervous eyes* No happiness...but once more, you are simply sublime!

-PyroSymptomsUnleashed

Draco! *swoon* Aww...he is a little bastard, isn't he...but a cute one. I love Ginny as you've developed her...she's so...confidant and assured while still a little uncertain...it's perfect.

-PyroSymptomsUnleashed

Smarmy-arsed Dean-arse Thomas...arse. Little buggershit. But as always, you rock! Please do write more, I love this little series.

-PyroSymptomsUnleashed

Haha...little twit Corner...I must say, you capture Ginny in a new light while still maintaining the story line from the books and keeping it plausible. You rock!

-PyroSymptomsUnleashed

Oh...dark and dramatic...just my style. HUZZAH for the incredible writer...um...go you. LOVE this piece...

-PyroSymptomsUnleashed

Whoa...what the fuck? Does anyone else notice an astonishing lack of reviews for this awesome piece? What, is there some sort of Concealment Charm on this? If not, you lazy-arsed people should be writing away fervent declarations of how AWESOME this story is. Go you!

-PyroSymptomsUnleashed

Love it! Every chapter of it, every word, every raunchy detail! Oh! Marvelous! I dunno what else to say! Great job!

This was definatley my favourite chapter, though Dean was interesting and Draco was expected, still pleasing though. This is probably the more common Ginny that one would see...the love complexity and somewhat normality.

Really great writing you did here! I'm going to read the sequel now, so I hope it's as good ;)