that was good. i don't know Kanzeon's personality either, but what you wrote would be what i would pick for her.

Wow. That was really nice. Very simple and sweet in its way. Your stories continue to uphold your reputation for excellence. It makes me wish I had time to start writing again. One little thing. You might want to make a more distinctive separation between the story and your notes at the beginning and end. Right now they're kind of running together and it's a little confusing. That's all! Until next time!

What a delightful little story. It's a unique perspective, and the narrative voice is quite consistent. "There is great sorrow in remembering happiness in times of misery..." A sparkling gem of a line. I truly enjoyed this different outlook, it was very refreshing. Thanks for sharing.

That was great! Really profound. YOu did a great job portraying Kanzeon Bosatsu's personality, especially relating it to Goku. ^_^ Nice job! ^^

Wow. I'm at a loss for words, and that doesn't happen very often. This was...wonderful. Your Bosatsu is just perfect - pensive and yet witty as well. You've got a knack for this, obviously. And you say you've written better? Intriguing...

great!
reaaly great!