Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: She Is Eternal
Fawe
2009-01-22 . chapter 1
Interesting idea. Small nitpick - "She is eternal" would be illa eterna. Ille eternus is masculine.
DonEmilia
2004-03-24 . chapter 1
Oh my god!
That was so good! And so sad!
Well done.
Kim892
2004-03-22 . chapter 1
Sniff . . .yeah that one really had me spouting tears. Poor Sam! Great Story.
C
2004-03-22 . chapter 1
Depressing, totally and absolutly depressing, and kind of disjointed, but good overall.
Sci Fi Fan Gillian
2004-03-22 . chapter 1
That was really good.
BizzyLizzy
2004-03-22 . chapter 1
That was so sad and so unexpected. Good work. It might have worked a little better if you'd broken it up to show the passage of time, but it was still really good.
Sirus183
2004-03-22 . chapter 1
This was Good.
Return to Top