Interesting idea. Small nitpick - "She is eternal" would be illa eterna. Ille eternus is masculine.

Oh my god!
That was so good! And so sad!
Well done.

Sniff . . .yeah that one really had me spouting tears. Poor Sam! Great Story.

Depressing, totally and absolutly depressing, and kind of disjointed, but good overall.

That was really good.

That was so sad and so unexpected. Good work. It might have worked a little better if you'd broken it up to show the passage of time, but it was still really good.

This was Good.