I'm not sure exactly what to say, I mean, wow.

That was horrible, utterly detestable, with a shitty plot and unfathomable mind leaps.

The writing style is okay, but there were too many cliches in there, and they were all used out of context. It made me shudder while I was reading, and I cringed once I finished. Now I'm off to find a suitable barf bucket.

ooh...one last question...

Marianne?

Lillian?

I suggest that instead of polluting the site with more crap, you go find a kite, and attempt to fly it...if you're not totally inept at that too.

very, flowery. it is good the way i like it.

*SNIFFLE* I thought that was great. You really shouldn't have changed her name, but I must say the fic was surprisingly well organized, and I liked which moments in their pasts you chose to recapture. I've always thought that young Sirious and Minerva made a perfect pair. I also think that after Sirius was sent to Azkaban, McGonagall became close with Snape. Make of that what you will. To me she has a connection with these two worst enemies, and I've always thought that may have fueled their rivalry.

Cheers,

MK

Awe, very cute, I like the idea...

Please continue! !

Aw Cute! I thought about a Macgoniggal/Sirius romance, but didn't think I coudl pull it off. You did it really nicely, althoguh soem of the jumps befuddles me momentarily-whoa big words ACK-it was great! Write more! It made Minerva( Which is her real first name. I"ms ure you knwo that anyway-seem more...real.

That was REALLY sweet.

Write more! Have something like a reunion between them. You can have Harry standing there or something. It'd be so good. I loved this story! It was great!

Write a sequel! Please? ? lillith

Oooh! That was gorgeous! sighs with dreamy look in eyes I never thought about them that way... it was really beautiful and perfect. I think I'm a hopeless romantic

The idea was nice, but I didn't really like it.

COOL!

great i want to know whats going to happen next