niakbor-

Nice twist ending.

wait...ron rapes bon/cuts her tounge out,kills monkey, and then rapes kim? i dont get it.

Twisted, but insufficiently violent for my tastes.

pretty good...

good job

you have the writting of a goth who is ticked of but you have skill and that is pretty good

twisted but boy do you know how to write!

You are one sick dude.

Sick, but talented.

Rock on.

That was so incredibly creepy. But it was REALLY good. I'm going to have to check out your other work.

Yeah, I liked the original ending a HECK of alot better. Maybe you should like, rebound off of the orig. ending. Just a suggestion, but hey, it's your fic, go kick some ass!
Jewelie

I also prefer the original ending. I think that you went way, way, *way* too far with the fates of the various characters, especially in the last paragraph. What was once a fun (if risque) read became unnecessarily gruesome. Ugh.

That was rather unique. A little harsh, but unique.

Whoa, again! Talk about a kick-you-in-the-stomach ending. Sure, it was depressing, but the sadness is negated by the fact that the principles kinda sorta had it coming. A cruel thing to say, but you read the story, right? I love how you kept the author's identity a secret until the last sentence. Good job.

I think I liked the first ending better. It seemed to give more justice to Kim (who seemed to play a bigger victim in the other chapters). In the end - I don't really know... this alternate ending had it's moments too. Perhaps it's better you made two endings - let the people decide how they want it to play out (kinda like choose your own adventure) :D
I'm looking forward to your next story - is it going to be similar to this one?

dude this ending blowed big...your story was fucking awsome but this is the most shitiest ending ive ever read...EVER! ha kim killing ron, whatever kim deserved what she got, ron didnt that ending was bullshit...your a talented writer really you are but endings like that tend to turn some readers away from your stories...I dont mean to be an ass as im sure im making myself out to be, but seriously even YOU have to admit the ending sucked...could you please do me a favor and make an alt ending with ron on top _ PLEASE! T_T I BEG OF YOU!

Wow, you are the devil himself.
That was truly a great story. And man, that last chapter certainly came out of left field. I had to re-read it just to make sure I got everything. In all, a marvelous, slightly disturbing, twisted story about love lost, redemption, and, most importantly, betrayal.
Jolly good show.