I think you should of brought back the Insecticons

Wheelie hater!

I want to tell you Jason this is one of the best Transformers stories I have ever read. I always like G1 the best the spinoffs don't measure up to the original. I hope this isn't the end of the story because this is really good and that you continue with new stories. Keep up the great work.

Dominic

I hope that this isn't the real end of the story. I really would like to see what else you can conjure up with your imagination. This is really good.

hot Stuff! Glad to see Galvatron finally got killed and that Megatron is back. Nice touch with the whole Primus thing - and whats even better to see is that for once the Decepticons have the upper hand!

'Til all are One

Not bad. Keep up the good work!

This "Transformers" story is excellent. It definitely brings the Decepticons' one true leader, Megatron, back to the fold. I like this adventure because it's set during the fourth season of the old "TF" cartoon show. I also like how Autobot and Decepticon alike have created new warriors for their troops (I'm into the new 'con troops more). "The Transformers" and "The Transformers: The Movie" are currently on DVD from Rhino Entertainment, with enhanced picture and sound. Feel free to buy them anytime. Thank you.

Unbelievable, unparralelled, and just in general stupendous. This is the best story continuation of G1 I have ever read. Yor depiction of Megatron is perfect, rectifing some of his old weaknesses, and turning him into a real decepticon leader. I encourage you to keep with it and update as soon as possible.

Now I will have to read this in further detail later, but I wanted to let you know that you need to SLOW down. take time to explain the sceens, and for that matter we need page breaks indicating sceens. What was Optimus and the others doing during the battle, he could have been sipping on lemonaid for all I knew. Remember once you open up a situation and mention certain characters you must also elaborate on what they are doing. The reader won't know unless you tell them.
I am wondering where you are going to take this (but I can't read until school is out becuase I really need to study so I can graduate). Did you ever wonder why Galvatron was so insane? Could it have been after Unicron was destroyed. He seemed pretty sane when he was under Unicron's control. Maybe something about his destruction malfunctioned Galvatron? But I do agree with you, Megatron was a much better leader.
Other then needing to slow down your pace and elaborating your sceens (more detail about surroundings and movements and such) this can get interesting. Oh one other thing... It was pretty obvious that Wheelie was scraped when he turned to dust. Don't repeat yourself. Now of course Optimus needed to be told, but you shouldn't repeat yourself in text. For example... 'Wheelie¡s whole body was turned to dust. Wheelie was dead. Galvatron laughed maniacally. Hot Rod and Blurr got up just in time to see Wheelie terminated.' You kinda already told us that in like... three ways at the same time. You would want to refrain from repetition, unless that was what you were going for. Example... 'he was dead', Rodimus thought as he looked at the charred remains of his friend. 'he was dead, dead of all things. Wheelie was dead.' Galvatron's megacannon shoved into his face brought him back to the present. "Die Autobot!" Okay I know a little lame, but that's okay. That little tidbit (and probably not needed) not only described the fact that Wheelie was slagged, but also the fact of Rodimus' realization of the loss of life. Trust me that would be traumatic (I should know I just witnessed a car accident and police chase the bad guy down and arrest him).
I don't mean to flame, I only want to help you out. I will read more later, I promise (that is unless you don't want me to then I wont) but I will say this bit of encouraging words. Your story is one of the few I have found, in this part of the site, that actually makes sense and is worthy of being read.
Smile, Live, Laugh, Love and God Bless
Elfy
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AH excellent! The original Megatron is back, now that is cool!

Hi,
just read your story for the first time and I really liked what you did. Being a major fan of the original series I always wondered how it might have continued and you did a very good job. I agree with you that Megatron was a much better leader than Galvatron, whose insane ravings do nothing for me.
If I have any complaints at all, it's that you're cramming a bit too much action into too few words for my taste. I prefer my stories to be more paced. But that's pretty much all i have to complain about.
Hope to see you updating soon.

Excellent! Now that Megatron is back, things will turn much more interesting than they ever did with Galvatron.
1 question: Is Starscream ever going to comeback in your story? He may be dead, but his ghost is still lurking out there somewhere.
Keep up the good work.

Interesting story. I noticed that you decided to eliminate Wheelie, the Quintessons, and Galvatron. Probably not a bad decision.
Wheelie's dead?
Is that what you said?