i like it so far. ^^

i loved the chapter very life like. never fun going home when you have to go through rain though.

november 24th is my brothes birtday lol
i love your story

my birthday is the 29th of august go souta

You are an awesome writer, gramatically speaking. However, I can't help but find your story confusing. Simple things like her eyes being blue in the first chapter, then in the others brown I can understand. However, in this chapter you say she will, "turn 14," but in an earlier chapter you said she was already 14. For that matter, how come Sesshy's birthday wasn't mentined? Still, it is a very good story overall and I look forward to reading the rest. In addition, I would like to thank you for putting so much effort into your writing. Most authors on this site have so many grammer and spelling mistakes. It is refreshing to see someone who knows what they are doing. Keep up the good work.

Why does Kagome have to be so young?

Um ... is it me or did i miss something cuz I'm very confused. Anyway it was a good story but to many unanswered questions.

Huh. I've read this story before, but it was under a different author. Was your penname previously LuePie? Maybe I was thinking of something else, but when I read this story, it wasn't under the name of AiVixen.

Aww. I loved your story! It was adorable. At first I thought I wouldn't like it because of how early it all seemed to be, but I absolutely love how it played out, and the ages only made it more innocent and endearing. It was a light read that made me smiley and all warm inside. ^.^ And I LOVE the ending. I had thought it would be an AU, but those last lines just added an entire prelude to the Inuyasha series! Clever, clever. Your story made me giggle. And smile. Congrats!

Yeah, not to be a **, but you just should've waited to post the last chapter...It was the most beautiful story I've read in a while until this chapter.

Maybe it is time for that rewrite?

what's with the last two sentences of the story before you wrote your AN? why is Kags avoiding Sesshy?

ending sucks and i dont get it.

*i punch you in the face*

DIE!

anyway gr8 story..
dont get me started again on the ending.

this was really good i hope a sequal will be comming out soon

is it just me or does it story seem to resemble Card Captor Sakura?

OMG...you are so...wow, i don't even have words to tell how great you are! the end played into the story, sesshomaru's gone , she turns 15... i would have never thought that to happen. u rule! ^_^