Good work keep it up.

you PROMISED there would be more PROMISED please write more.

The first chapter were hard to read, but you fixed it in the fourth and I ended up really liking it.

wow.. This paring rock! I love this paring. Please update other chapter fast.

That was great,please update._

oh...hey, I like this story...) Ethan is so dumb...I just love him...haha. Keep it a comin'!

DUDE! Please update! It's so good!

Ele

Saying it's this person's first fic is very dumb. My first fic was great, had great grammar and spelling, and definitly was NOT squished together.

Reading is much easier and better organized when paragraphs are used. It's something you learn way back in 3rd grade. I think you should give it a try.

Great so far! I'm happy that Gordo and Ethan got together! Update soon or I'll cry!

Ok, first of all, don't listen to those flamers that say yuour stories suck. This is your first story and may have some mistakes. I think this story is really good and you should continue, even though it is out-of-date. I'm serious, this is a relly interesting story, but I would like to see more of Ethan and Gordo. You've got to continue and listen to what your heart says, and I would also like to be your beta reader. Ok, just e-mail at: .

Hey... umm... i've been waiting for more of the story for a long time... when are you gonna have more chapters? please hurry.. thanks bye

KEEP WRITING!

first of all if yor story stinks don't be roude second of all the other reviers who said nasty stuff if you don't have anything nice to say don't say it

"your grammer is HORRIBLE" ...Okay, now let me take a moment to laugh. And suggest you look up the spelling of 'grammar' in a dictionary, or at least use spell check.

NOW. Let's stop this bickering about whether or not the fic is good or not, especially eliminating the use of the word 'gay' as synonymous to 'stupid' because nowhere in the definition of 'gay' is the word stupid or anything close to it, and it's insulting to use it that way.

Now to the actual reveiw. AslansAngel, I think your fic, as a first fic, has a quite a bit of potential. Certainly more than MY first fic did. Don't let them get you down, honey. However, may I suggest investing in a beta (a person online or otherwise that agrees to be your editor)? They're free and their advice on the little things that writers miss like plotholes and grammar mistakes are priceless. Even best of writers have them-in fact, they often rely on them to get their fic the way they are.

Best of luck!

Catie