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frooker
2005-12-28 . chapter 4
I like it... not like other authors that makes crappy poetry... I really like it... you changed the atmosphere into a really dramatic, yet ironic way... It really a very wel writen poetry...sigh... just why in seven's hell are you so short in reviews?! well anywayz... I like it... scratch that I LOVE it!
Jasmine Fields
2005-05-11 . chapter 4
I love this... truly, truly. Beautiful
ShortPoet
2004-04-05 . chapter 4
Where to begin...I loved every word...the truth captured in each poem...the way they all relate yet stand alone all at once...you captured the paradox of the dynamic that lies between the characters...I think you've used this word before BRILLIANT and it applies here most especially. I love poetry..especially good poetry which this is...Very GOOD poetry... I'm glad I was stuck or I wouldn't have found this as I was roving the site tonight. GREAT JOB!
FANTASTIC poems.
Looking forward to reading anything else you submit,
Mary
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