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HaiJu 2008-04-07 ch 7,	abuseI like it! You've pretty much nailed the characters, kept an angsty (yet refreshingly logical) story going, and ended it nicely. I love the way you portrayed Sousuke, it suits his personality perfectly. Please don't remove these stories! I've only just gotten into this anime, and it's hard to find great fics like this one. Thank you for writing! ~Hj
Cat, Avatar for the DCG 2007-07-28 ch 7,	abuseWas afraid it was gonna go dark for a bit there, but it was rescued. Thanks for writing a fun fic!
TheHuntressandtheHunted 2006-05-24 ch 7,	abuseWell... excellent! Simply excellent!
SVS (someone very special) 2005-06-25 ch 7, anon.	abuseThis was a good story good job
Cristina 2005-02-10 ch 7, anon.	abuseCute ending
EKUHz 2004-12-31 ch 7, anon.	abusei liked the ending. it's really good. at first i was scared that it would go the wrong way. but it looks like you know ezaktallie what your doing ^^ i also appriciate the fact that you made the characters, more them .Lol. kaz lot of fan fics the characters didn't seem like them . err. lOl .i'm confusing to unserstand. sorry if i confused you ^^l
soul 2004-10-18 ch 7, anon.	abusethey must have kissed in the end right?
MJP 2004-10-04 ch 7,	abuseIt kinda ended on a bit of an anticlimax for me... I felt like the villains were added as an afterthought to turn this into an action-twist fic. I really would have liked to see more of a lead-up and viewing of the opposition. We see them, we see the threat as it happens, but nothing leading up to it. The third-person omniscient viewpoint allows for this... I would have liked more of the ingress into the hospital, etc. Moreover, there's not really clarity as to Sosuke suddenly getting the amnesiatic attack, nor any serious resolution. I really would have liked the closure to have happened. However, these don't detract from the story itself. The beginning was very strong, very unique. I think that it sort of was dragged down by the end... it feels like you kinda kicked out the last chapters. However, this was a great fic to have read and very enjoyable to have experienced nonetheless.
SingleServing 2004-09-09 ch 7,	abuseWhat a wonderful story. Great description and imagery. I hope there will be a sequel! (This is Katharine, the girl who e-mailed you, by the way. Thank you for directing me to the last chapter!)
Rachel2 2004-08-20 ch 7,	abuseIt was a little shorter than I thought it would be, however, it still works. ^__^ Good job.
donna8157 2004-08-17 ch 7,	abuseHi. I tried reviewing this story yesterday, but FF.net was acting up. "Bad ff.net!" Anyway, I initially found your story on deleria's site and couldn't help but read it because it was based off FMP. I think you did a great job in characterizing Sousuke. He was really true to his character in the first series with how extreme his paranoia can go. Great work and it's a bit disheartening to see it end, but I'm glad you completed it! Great work. I hope you will do more FMP fics.
SILENT TROWA 2004-08-14 ch 7,	abuseits true the ending was a bit rushed, but not bad nonetheless. This is one of my favorite FMP fics. well done, mate.
Soul of Insanity 2004-08-10 ch 7,	abuseI just found this fic today, and I must say, very impressive! You were able to draw me in right away with the first chapter and I read the story straight through. But it's over? Aww, that's sad! But it was great while it laster. Please write more FMP fics, you're a great author!
CurlsofSerenity 2004-08-09 ch 7, anon.	abuseKAWAII a little rushed at the end, ne?
Felick 2004-08-08 ch 7, anon.	abuseGreat job! i'm glad you finished it, seems like lots of people like it. good for you! Hope you write some more, i know it'll be great, perhaps a sequel, or anything. WE need more FMP fanfiction. and sousoke and kaname need to get together! So, what was sousoke not so clueless about. i would like to know their conversation. WEll, great job. Felick

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