this story is absolutely amazing. the explanation of love and suh was believable and brilliant, the writing style insightful and refreshing.
however, two problems. one, i fail to see the relevance of making Harry a soulless monster (add to that, i didn't half-understand what you meant as well :P) and two, the pairing (it's just not my thing.)
besides from that, great stuff!

Bye! :D :)

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this story was absolutely riveting! it's an unusual premise, and with the harry-evans-golem, young Bella and real harry, not to mention all of the love-related plot, i might not have chosen to read it.

however, i'm really glad i did - and the way that the story leads you through everything and slowly reaffirms 'evan's place in the world and the hearts of those he cares for is truly wonderful.

and now i've written an essay. sorry for waffling, and thank you for sharing this!

Wow. That's one of the most interesting ideas I've come across. Harry as a golem. Huh. :) Great story!

Wow this was INCREDIBLY interesting.
At first I was having a little trouble keeping up with the different names bit, but I am too happy to have held on until the very end.
A very very good spin on the HP series.
Intricate, well thought out and yet short.
You write very well to have conveyed a Complete story line in one chapter.
Congrats, It was a pleasure to read!

Found a reccomendation at FictionAlley.

Wonderfully entertaining. Original and well put together.

This was a tad confusing but really good. Are you going to make a sequel? Please?

very mind boggling concept but unique. i liked it.

This was a really fascinating idea, and I really enjoyed reading it. I felt particularly bad for Hermione.

Very strange. Well written, and certainly a novel take on the Harry Potter universe, but still rather odd. It's nice to read something a little bit different every now and then, though, and despite the unusual subject matter, you make it sound like a plausible theory.

Amazing concept! cool story...

very very nice =)

are you planning on more chapters?

Unique, well-written, twisted...I have never read anything like it. What an amazing and original take on Harry's past and Voldemort's defeat, something I would never have thought of even in my wildest dream and something that you have made possible. You should be extremely proud of this story. :)

So at this point, I'm pretty confident in guessing that this is a one-shot, as it hasn't been updated in three years.

Never the less...

It stand alone on it's own just fine, but I really would love to see how you'd continue with this idea.

That said, update please?

this is a beautiful story. i love it!

Hi! I loved your story and I just wanted to let you know that I niffled (recced) this fic over at Fiction Alley Park.

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