wow this is such a good fic, i hope that you update soon! You are really talented i cannot wait to find out what happens later in this story!
UPDATE!
Thanks

please update, this is really good!

hey , i think ur story isok ,well g2g ok bye

Super cute story! I wish you could get the next chapter out sooner, but hey, I can wait!! Update ASAP!

keep writing update soon it sounds interesting

Well I don't think the pace is going to fast. The changes in pov don't confuse me. No it was interesting in the begining, all in all I like it.
It's a good story and I enplor (I think that is how it is spelled) you to keep it up.

Wow i loved i cant wait 4 more update real soon.

Wow, nicely written story so far. I am enjoying it, and I can't wait for more! Keep up the great work, and I will wait patiently for the next chapter ^_^

Hey! This story's awesome! Keep up the awesome work! I can't wait for Darien & Serena to actually meet for the first time! YAY! Can't wait for your next update!

I do not usually review unless I feel a story worthy of praise or incredible to critique. In this case, it is the former. You have a keen sense of grammar and few to rare spelling errors, which are talents that, lately, have been incredibly hard to locate in the fanfiction realm. Your characterization is well developed and your plot intriguing. To top that off, your originality with this fanfic is incredible. I have often run into business-type fanfics, expecting the same typicality, and yet, this fanfic managed to prove me wrong, my eyes unable to turn away from your enrapturing words, enthralled with every sentence I read. You have an amazing talent, one that is not often found. If I were to suggest anything at all, it would be that you attempt to write at a little slower pace (however, not incredibly slow that the events take forever to occur). Your fanfic was well written, however, on occasion, I felt that some things were not thoroughly explained or just simply occurred too fast. Aside from the before mentioned suggestions, there was nothing I could find that utterly displeased me. Your fanfic captivates the reader and draws him/her into the fanfiction, bearing the idealistic magnetic quality that most authors strive for. Again, I reiterate, you have fantastic writing skills, ones that no longer come easily. Keep up the impressive work, and I hope to see more from you soon ^.^.

kol

curses!! write more you fiend!! how dare you leave us with these half-hints about something in serena's past... *scowls* i will have to stalk you if you don't write...
and remember...i know where you live!! muahaha

Update soon, please? Thanks!!

Hey!! Love the story! The beginning was kind of boring (no offense) but then it just draws you in. I'm addicted! Write the next chapter really soon please!

Wonderful! Simply wonderful please continue ASAP.