^^ This is sugoi!
Original too, methinks.

There were two things I noticed. The first was your spelling of 'lemure'. It's always plural; 'lemures' is the correct spelling.

Secondly, in Chapter 4, you really don't need to be fluent in Japanese to know "Konnichi-wa"...at all.^^;; Some *only* know 'konnichi-wa' or 'sayounara.'

I hope this has been helpful, and keep writing!
SF

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love it!

I love it please up date asap!

i am enjoying your story so far but its only talking no description so you should try to work on that a bit, but thats just my suggestion you don't have to take it :)

hmm..t.hings are happening!! and..falling into place and stuff!!

hm...are the other two amazons going to be joining cere n' jun? lol i have a feeling they will!

chibi-usa has the mirror thingy, huh?

o...go sailor senshi!!

this is interesting. i dont' know too much about SM as it is, but i'm quite curious where you take this after all of the new characters are introduced. However, it also becomes confusing because there are so many characters and it becomes hard to distinguish between all of them.

so... why did kayla ask if autumn would be her friend now? what's the past with them..?

Cool update. So the senshi won't be able to transform until they find their counterpart? Thanks for putting the char names and how they changed ^-^ I'm still trying to picture Michiru with short red hair LOL! Heh. Thanks for sharing. Please do update soon.

that was a confusing chapter :S:S

Awesome...I'm waqiting on more..lol

Interesting start. You've given them normal hair colours I take it? Is Michiru a redhead too?Well I'm sure Haruka wouldn't mind that too much hehe. Oh and you might want to think about putting a list of their undercover names with their real identities so it isn't as confusing.
But please continue. I'm enjoying it!