This is a lovely piece. I like the way you had Gojyo reflect on just how they are tied together, whatever certain parties have to say about it. *evil grin* Great job on making the fic melt into canon, both plot-wise and style wise, with heaploads of innuendo but no actual action. *thumbs up*

And of course I'm a sucker for everything that points out just how deeply interwined Sanzo and Goku's lives are. *beams*

*huggles*

OOH! I LOVED it! That's one of your best yet! I love the interplay between Gojyo and Hakkai (my favorite!) and you always stay tru to their characters! I loved your reasoning too and you're right... Titanium Violets is a perfect title. Keep up the utterly awesome work! Smiles!

(sorry if this is a simul-review, but my internet's being a ** and so whenever I try to review [which I seem to have been doing often lately], after clicking the "Submit Review" button it comes up with "Cannot Find Page" or something...)
That's so sweet! Great job >

oi, hello there. i'm actually one of your fans, do you know? and with this fic i just caught my breath at the ease of the conversation and how easily the story moved along. you did a great job here and no mistake about it! love it a lot, so i'm putting it in my faves list. thank you.

Er… you do non-gen-fics? I mean, there's some fluff and cuddles in some of your other stuff, but on a citric acid litmus scale I don't really see anything harder than apples. Or maybe you post somewhere else? -vOv-
I have this to say, though: turning around does not, in a quiet environment with still air, have a lot to do with quality of sound. I deduce therefore that Gojyo, either because of his condition or for some other reason, was watching Hakkai's lips pretty closely. For comprehension enhancement, of course. (smirks)
That said, a nice piece, and quite believable spackle. Your placement of the conversation in the series is good, I think, since I don't think Gojyo would have lowered himself down off his pride to have it if he were feeling quite himself.
I'm not sure you meant it this way, but I ended the piece thinking, poor Hakkai! He's been at this nursing game *all night.* I hope he was allowed to take a nap the next day! ^_^

Oh, I like this conversation back and forth. It's really great, and you can feel that late night atmosphere.
And I like your theory, of how Gojyo and Hakkai decide to protect the other two. It makes sense!!
Really nice

"I hope you enjoyed."
Oh, I did. Tremendously. Can't object to anything like this. It's fresh, original... a great piece. Kudos to you and the plot bunny as well. ^^

Lovely as always, I do like the improvements you added in this one. ^_^ Keep it up! You're finding some good genfic in that head of yours.