Great story. I could really picture it all.

I loved this! You had me cackling out loud. :P Both clever and original. I love how you write Goren and Eames, and their relationship.

I like it, clever kidding around. Hope you continue!! Super worrk

I just loved this piece.

Loved it. Was funny, and very well written. Keep it up! :)

Oh, this was wonderful. Loved Eames' musings, and Goren's reactions to other men's reactions :)
"Oh, and be sure you don't take off your shirt in the middle of a drunken crowd while I'm gone. I won't be close enough to intervene"
LOL!!

Insightful.
I love it. It doesn't need another thing. I love it where you left it.
Totally in-character (in my opinion).
I've run out of ways to say that I love it. I can only dream of writing this well.
--Brae

More?

this is good! Are you gonna write more?

Hey good ficcy. Is it finished?

Nicely done! Very in-character for them both.

I liked it, I thought it was funny. Loved the scene about the tub top girl.