^_^
It makes me happy.

bloody hell. That's the most poetic thing I've read since... forever? A long time, anyway.
"Life, such as it is, consists of nothing more than moments, occasional names and faces coming clear through the blur.
The most common, and vivid, is yours.
While adrift in this storm of too silent too loud, too rough too still, I need an anchor to grasp. A cornerstone. A rock." That part blew me away completely.
"Blushing, is it? I won’t deny I’m amused. It suits you to have a color other than pasty white stain your cheeks. That aside, insubordination is something I will not tolerate. Not from anyone. Not from you." Describes Trinity perfectly (in my opinion).
Again, wow.

That was...Amazing.
I'm breathtaken.
Do you need more?

It's got such a good rhythm to it. I really can't stress enough how the clipped language and thought-dialogue just works. It's like Tarantino--there is nothing superfluous, nothing drags it down or slows it up or distracts the reader. Trinity speaks with a purpose, a knowingness of herself that is completely in character. It's phenomenal how un-conflicted she is about her confusion; her playfulness is unexpected but on a second thought makes absolute sense. Just wonderful writing, very intriguiging. Looking forward to more.

superbly well written, old chap! muy bien. no spelling errors, thank GOD, realistic, flowing, and beautiful. Not mushy. Yay!

Wow, what a unique point of view. I really like it. Please write more soon.