AWW YOU PUT THE PERFECT ENDING IN THERE TOO SQUEE. ! c:

...SQUEE.

OMAI. o3o

I love this story and I so would've reviewed earlier if I hadn't been distracted by the fact that there's always another chapter that I MUST READ.

But, for this chapter...

OHSNAP.

LEBLANC x NOOJ DRAMARAMA.

Hey Only just found this! hehe

Ooh this is exciting! Who likes who? x

whys paine being so mean man? lol baralais a hot piece of ass! come on! you no u want it hahaa

o and ur storys good

ok, i probably won't have time to review the last chapter, but WHOA! it's really, really good! a little fluffy, but it's realistic and oh-so-in-character! i admire your solidity and storyline accuracy. 8.5/10

ps. don't forget to check over your spelling, there are some niggling mistakes here and there. alerted.

before i review properly (at the end of chapter 18), i would just like to point out some little spelling mistakes.

(incorrect on the left, correct on the right.)

bevell - bevelle.

valefore - valefor.

fyth - fayth.

far plaines - Farplane.

yeavoner - Yevoner.

etc, etc. wait ten minutes before you get the real review. (it's going to be glowing, because this story is great.)

I honestly loved this story 3. It had no dull bits...you're continuing it? I hope so...I want more...more from you T.T, ok that sounds wrong...DX just update when you can

O! A sequal maybe?

Why can't Final Fantasy be real?

Gippal is a pervert...

I'm almost done reaing! X_x

Oh my!

I can't imagine Baralai glaring...

I'm already imagining their children! Oh my!