This was great! I loved the ending. It left the 'happy ending' up to the reader, yet it was a happy ending all the same. I also loved that you had Carly and Sonny both mature and realize that what they had was okay, but it was saner and safer for them to be apart. It was kind of like Sonny said on the show "We light a match and the whole house burns". That was how they were. It was time for them to move on when he put a bullet in Carly's head... I'm glad you wrote this and did such a wonderful job with it. If only the writers at GH could tap into some of that potential... :) I was sad to read that Carly grew apart from Jason since he was such a part of her past - and part of a past that really didn't include Sonny up until that hateful day they slept together. But, the maturation process isn't always sunshine and roses. Nicely done. CarLo rocks... hopefully, the writers will get it right this time around on the actual show!!

Molly

Awesome Story! Please continue!

You did wonderfully! I love CarLo, this was a great AU look at what the writers should have done right away. No more of this sonny/Car crap. Only CarLo forever darn it. I really liked the flow and the devlopment. You did a frist rate job with everything.

great story

hey,
i really liked this. i LOVED how you wrote carly...i only wish TPTB could do the same!
great job, looking forward to reading more carlo fics from you.
-laura