Really cool, is it supposed to be a kind of sequel to Nepanthe?
I love the thought's interwoven with the words. Were those the memory of a past conversation, or a conversation they were having right then? What's really neat about this story is that you don't have to know the answer to appreciate it.

though, I was hoping that at least one of your stories would have a happy ending (I guess this one is happy but I'm not sure if D's alive or not)

O.o that was definetly abstract... i couldn't rap my brain around it untill the varry end... so, is he dead? or just dead in real life? or alive? @.< brain... hurts...

it was still awsome!...*dies from brain exastion*

This story put me on the edge of tears! *sob* Poor Leon ... D! Come back! Come back to life! No! *sob*

*sniffle* Well, very well-done. Beautiful .. I love your style of writing!

Different, I will say that.

ithinkilikeit!
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...i think i like it! (there we go...)
i write ** like this too! *does a dance for similar uh.. **. (whoa)*
anyway, it may be old, but it's cool. ^^

very interesting... ^__^
he's a ghost that will haunt him forever... i wonder why he gave himself to leon? if that's what he did... oh man 0_O

Pretty.
and yes, very abstract, but the ending ties up the major loose ends, and leaves just enough to be pretty.

Very abstract, but very good. First fic like it that I've seen. Nice job!

Very cool. Definately wierd, but I still liked. Does that make me wierd too? o_0

Abstract, yes, but very atmospheric. One small point -- and I hope you won't take offence at this, as it's not meant to be a flame! -- while your language is very vivid, some of the italicized parts seemed a little too formal for Leon's POV. Good stuff overall though, and I love that last line :)

I was a little bit confused while reading it, but I really liked the italics which I think were supposed to be Leon's thoughts. I really like the parts in one paragraph where it reads: 'If I could have locked you in a cage and forced you to see only me...Kept the hands of reality from you , imprisoned you against my breast without mercy', and, 'I'm bleeding into the air and no one can see it, it exists only for your eyes...And I'll bleed to death because I can't do anything else, or feel anything else?'; I found those lines to be the most profound. Good job!

good story grate use of discription to show Leon's mentale state and overall mood for the story