Instresting. :)

I like this. I think Garshaw's opinion had changed by the end of Tok'Ra I and II. Unfortunately we see the bastardized version of them that the later writers gave to us rather than the ally version that Glassner began with. (which is why I don't write the bastardized version of the Tok'Ra but try to stay truer to the original intent for them.) A little mistrust made sense, but he never intended them to become the bad guys the way the ignorant, later writers wrote them. Ah, well. At any rate, I liked this story.

Snarky Selmak! I love it...she's so much fun :)

OK, that was delightful. Snarky Selmak - she's a lot like my mother, and the woman I want to be when I grow up.

hm. Very good and an interesting perspective.
The way you wrote selmak made him come across as a bit arrogant, though, well, that's how i inerpretted it. I frown. Oh well,
gute.
-jd

Cool idea for a story, and really well put together. :)

Very good and really well written. It would be great to see more along this line with Jacob in different situations.