Wow! Very 'bloody brilliant', as Spike from the Buffy the Vampire Slayer TV series would say.
Keep up the awesome, lovely work, as always.

Those plague rats are rather pesky, aren't they? It makes me think of the Simpsons Halloween episode "Scary Tales." "Ugh, I just got OVER the plague!"

Wow, your narrator sounds a little bit bitter.

This is really funny! The only thing I would fix is that you sometimes switch tenses. Just avoid it in the future.

hey! poor alestair... i can imagine that it must be hard for him to cope. wow this chapter was quite long not that im complaining or nething its a gd thing but it ust means that it takes longer for me to read it lol :D a gd chapter... but i prefer the ones with Rafael :D lol katie x

hey it is me again and i have finally got around to reading this chapter! lol... ok well this certainly explains a lot, about Lucinda and Dorothea and vampirism in the sense of ur story... oh and who the guy in her dreams is... i think im still voting for Rafael tho she shud be the one to turn her! :D lol katie x

Ah, Carmilla. It's good to see someone else who knows her story- and your writing shines through. Well done.

hey its me! lol i finally got round to reading this chapter, i have to admit i feel sry for poor Johnathan! and Misko it was a bit annoying the way that he kept calling Johnathan 'my friend' but i guess thats coz of the time that he was from... any way a good chapter! :D keep it up! x

Great story! I like the encoorperation of Carmilla. Also, you have a strong and unique voice. Cheers!

ah! that makes some things SO much clearer... im lookin forward to the story... i was wondering wen we would find out the deal wiv lucinda. aww rafael bless him. hm i like the idea of the diff types of vampires and that explains why Rafael call camilla the 'cat' hm... onto the next chapter! lol oh n im please to read that she didn't kill them... lol

man she's a bit slow! i can't believe she still thinks the guy who visits her AT NIGHT is in her DREAM! *shakes head* altho i have to admit the first line made me smile! 'Since I have met this Rafael, I have been so happy' aww bless her. and i could see that they were goin to be caught. i mean Camilla isn't stupid! hmm wonder wot happens to them... aww and shes goin out with Rafael on her birthday! hehe :D katie x

aww Rafael i LOVE i way that u write him to talk. i LOVE 2 lines this one 'O, such spirit! No one ever challenges me!' hehe it made me smile and this one 'Ah, I still have it.' this one is more typical for a guy! lol and as u already no i am a big fan of his! :D katie x

aww u see u no me way to well ur rite i do like misko especially this line 'Misko: We all make mistakes' hehe aww i hope u gets the girl altho knowing how u like johnathan he will. *cries* neways i like the fact that u set this out in a script like way, it makes it different and obviously because there practically dead its gd. ok so im not sure if that made sense but i know wot i mean! :D katie x

i liked this chapter also, except for some reason i feel as if i have no idea what is going on, perhaps it shwill all unfold, well anyway i cant wait to read more! off to chappie 4! toodles then!

I liked this chapter, i like it how Rapheal is arogent without being a complete snob, anywhore, i like how its in 1st person like youve dipped into his mind instead of being an outside narrator...anyway...thank you for your reviews...yes erotic fiction is my calling ::bows:: i cant wait to see what that sick mind of yours has instore for this story! and yes i have been pictureing gerard butler this whole chapter... :D toodles!

well first things first i was gonna stop readin after the last chapter and start writin my next chapter but then i saw that it was Rafael and honestly i dunno wot it is i just like his character... maybe he's charmed me wiv some sort of powers... lol so neways i was not dissapointed wiv him (not that i expected nething else) and i actually want him to be wiv dorothea hmm wonder if he does!? lol only one way to find out i suppose! hehe :D lol x