Aww!How sad! I'm glad he didn't die though... Cute couple!

I thought that was sweet. I'm a big HeeroxDuo fan though, I don't know why, maybe just 'cause they're the first GW couple I read about, and your first "anything" stays with you... But this was really good, I liked it!

I'm not too fond of slash, but bravo!

It's written pretty nicely... lacking just a pinch of detail I think.

Wow, your fic was really great! It seemed to capture the characters really well, and i could really imagine the story in my head! Really well done, and except for the spelling, it was really great! (the spelling didn't get in the way, though!)
Sheltie

oh kawaii! that was so cute! don't love and angst go perfectly together _ loved it you should consider a sequel to this well ja ne for now

I really liked your story...it was good...we need to see more quatre and duo stories. _