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great job!

Sorry about the writing, but I don't have a spell check thingy.. I use an HTML Editor.. I try proofreading it all.. but I'm kinda lazy, and I know I spell very nicely actually. I know I can spell. Maybe I just need abeta reader.. I really don't care that much.. -Shanni_C

Good fic overall, but lots of spelling errors. It was kind of annoying. But I liked the plot and the storyline and it was pretty funny. Good job.

Hey, this would be signed, but I was too lazy to log in. OK, anyway, I just wanted to say how good this was, and now it's said, so I'm gonna go! Keep up the good work! Val

WHAT! I'm a total Kari fan; how mean!

Nice story, even if I don't like jyoumi's that much.

'Eh.. I'm terrible at writing Izzy's Character.. I prefer Joe anyway.. _

Cool! Izzy was really OOC, but Joe wasn't. Oh yeah, Izzy has morals, so I don't think he'd make out in fornt of other people, lest making out.

Thisw would be signed, but Moonkitty3000 is driving me nuts, so this isn't. You know, if I EVER make a Mimoe more greater than yours, I will die! You write the best fics!

pretty good!