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| Grym 2006-03-31 ch 1, | abuseFantastic - and utterly realistic to the show, to Jack and Kate. I've only watched through most of Season 3 so far, but this seems quite believable, especially emotionally. Strangely enough, I think my favorite conversation is the one between Jack and Tony on the roof. (It could use some paragraph spacing between speakers, of course, but it's downright brilliant dialogue.) Is this something you'll continue? If so, count me among your eager readers! Well-writen, dead-on characterization, serious play about the dark and troublesome issues that exist in this relationship and in Jack's job. Love it! |
| Jara 2004-04-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, this series just keeps getting better. I really enjoyed this story, the relationship between Kate and Jack and the darker side to it all. Please keep writing, I'm very interested in seeing where this is going. |
| m-fashion 2004-04-05 ch 1, | abusegood...might have been easier for us bad sighted people to read if dividd in chapters..migth wanna thinmk about that. apart from that good |
| pheebs01 2004-03-25 ch 1, | abusethat was so great! omg you write so well! lol srry i am kinda speechless because of that story... great job! :) |