this is good.=3

How cute :)

Oh, lovely. I love the description of her lips.

Very interesting piece; great job on bringing these two cousins to some sort of understanding, the anime should have done more to bring them together.

Good job!

Oh, that was so sweet.

I am an incoherent puddle of fangirlish glee, but I needed to tell you how awesome you are. I love the end, and how he decides it's a bad idea and then does it anyway. ^_^

It flowed wonderfully. Neji and Hinata's feelings were put out perfectly--I could really feel them.

The one thing that bothered me was the form in which you posted it in--I'm used to block paragraphs. But eh. ^_^

Very nice fic!

yay! i just loved the moment when their sight met! i almost could feel the tense!! great job! and so what that they're practically like sibling! love is ...blind...O_o (it sounds strangely when im thinking about Hyugaas...but somehow ..its appropriate...)

This was lovely. The characterization of Neji was spot on, and I see Hinata becoming this way when she grows a little older. I loved the scene when they were both watching one another with their Byukagan! That was very creative, funny and touching all at once. Just like this entire fic. Beautiful!

*_* Beautiful, simply wonderful. Please keep up the good work.

a good story. I wish it wasn't just a one-shot.

You DO know that Neji and Hinata are cousins right ? If yes : EW. If No : Still EW.

This was a very excellently done piece. The words fall to place as plentifully as water, but the reader gets the feeling that every word is in place. I liked the ending best -- you managed to make the reader feel the raw, uncertain, hesitant emotions of both characters -- both portrayed convincingly. This is none of the usual fluff churned out daily -- it's too good to be labeled as that. :) Keep up the good work. Will it be hoping for too much if you did a follow-up fic?

IS this a one shot fic? It's good. I like odd pairing and this is one of my favorite, you help me got hooked to NejiHina fic