That's a common theme. Well written either way.

I loved the batarang line!

Rather clever. I enjoy your sort of stream-of-conciousness style, and Robin's attitude. (I'd tell you to ignore the other rather rude reviews, but I have a feeling you probably get a laugh out of them.)

Just one question: WHAT. DID. YOU. SMOKE?

ah! i read your first review and am appalled that someone would write something like that! i have recieved flames before, but they at least told me #why# they didn't like the story!
i must say that, this isn't the best story i've ever read, for the style is a bit odd and choppy, almost as though it were uploaded in poetry format, but the ideas are good and it seems to fit tim drake. i especially enjoyed the ending. if you were just to re-write it with a bit better style, such as reworking the sentances to flow better, it would be a great story! i still like it though, even with the mistakes.

huh, this story sucked