I was listening to that one song from "Wicked" as I read this. "for Good" it's called, and I almost cried. I really like this story. It's so sad! But that's one of the reasons I like it! Very good job!

It's such a good story...but it's so horrible! It's too sad. :(

Damn you, why did you kill off Yuna?? Now I'm all upset cause Yuna died. lol.

But seriously it's very well written and the ending was surprising.

My god...oh my sweet jesus god... the story was going so sweet so happy so romantic...then you decided to blow the ending to hell i mean why? You made yuna die and made tidus go haywire ... but you did me cry... Your story is the first one to make me cry... The plot before the ending was awesome...truly awesome

Yeah, this story was SO bittersweet. It was really well written, but the ending...wow it got me teary. I think you should do a continuation or something. Throw us poor readers a bone!

Wow. This story actually made me cry.
It was all going good in the beginning but.. That was just.. Unexpected. It was a beautiful story.

Oh my god ...I think I'm going to cry!
Excuse me for one moment. (sniff,sniff)(honk,honk)(sniff,sniff)(honk). What will happen with Tidus and his newborn baby girl? What will happen? Please tell all us fans that this is only a dream and not real! Please continue with the story!

it was going so well too...

I don't if it has a point in me writing this review, but...

The story was well written, all good--really good. I liked it...except...the ending. It was...UNEXPECTED. And maybe that was what you wanted--for it to be unexpected, to surprise us readers... or maybe you just felt like it. I don't know, really. I don't have any way in knowing it. But... congrats, you surprised me--and that's no very easy.

The story--the ending, kinda saddened me... and I think...I feel that the ending didn't flow with the story. There's no much of a CONNECTION, you know? It's like this abrupt thing... but...I liked the way you portrayed the characters in their situations.

Well done on that. ^-^

But anyone...I shouldn't ** too much. I said what I thought over it...and it's your story.

SO. The plot was good. The way you portrayed the character were good, as well. Just, in my personal opinion, the ending blew it.

But oh well. Good work either way.

Oh god...

It was wonderfully writing, and very funny at times... I only have one bad comment...
HOW COULD YOU KILL YUNA?
How could you kill her? She can't leave TIdus on his own! Omg, I'm crying my eyes out here! If you wished to make me cry- well! You succeeded!
*sob*

OH My GOD! How can you Kill Yuna! Huhuhuhu!

Damn you know.. The story is very beautiful but you did a sad ending, (for a change).. i was on the verge of tears *thank god they didnt fall*.
:'-(

You know I hate you for this story, right? It's so GOOD that I was absolutly sobbing by the ending. Yuna's death was tragic, and Tidus...it made me rember that one scene where he learns that Yuna is going to die by performing the final summon and starts beating up Valefor, or trying to. Good job, keep up the great work!

I can't... I just don't know. I love that Tidus has a baby but who's gonna be the mother figure? I just don't know, I was half between smashing my mouse and crying.

POOR TIDUS! That's terrible. Poor guy. This was wonderfully written, but it was very sad too.

~Padfoot

I loved the story -- for the most part.

It's not that I'm not a fan of sad endings -- I *loved* the FFX ending and thought that FFX-2 killed all the meaning it had.

But this ending just didn't work. With how humorous it was for the most part it seemed so odd and kind of ridiculous in that sense.

I'm disappointed because after searching for a GOOD FFX story, which proved rather difficult, I thought I finally found a *perfect* one. And it was, I want you to know that. Except that ending killed it.

What's the meaning?