 Taeniaea 2007-02-11 . chapter 5I Love The Chapter:5 Plz Plz Update It Soon!! |
 BlackAdder42 2006-06-24 . chapter 5Hey there! I've read over both this story and its prelude now, and I have to say that it takes the cake for originality! I haven't seen one like this before... The only thing I can really complain about is... WHY IS THIS NOT UPDATING?! Are you going to continue this story or...? |
 Karla 2005-07-02 . chapter 5 i absolutely love your work!! I spent the whole day re-reading them cause i loved them so much :) |
 Isley. Dweller of the Deep 2005-07-01 . chapter 5*Whistels* Hey, Aaron... glad to see that you are back in business; writing again :-)
I enjoyed reading "Shades of Grey" as I am this story. Keep up the good work -- though I would say not to take so long writing it ;-) hehe -- nice work takes time to write!
Martin |
 gothicgirl527 2005-03-09 . chapter 1me luv it! :'highly recommends to other's:'
and ur story is going on my fav's! |
 Jeshone 2004-12-05 . chapter 4 wow, these next few chapters are going to be extremely worth reading keep up the good work. |
 Zanfib 2004-11-28 . chapter 4 Very good, do not be disheartened by the lack of reviews. |
 Karla 2004-10-09 . chapter 3 I still love your work and enjoy reading it. This is one of my favourite stories in the fanfiction realm. |
 Meara 2004-10-07 . chapter 1When I saw that this story had "Champions" my first reaction was to groan and almost reach for the back-button. The first few sentences were well crafted enough to hold my attention. After reading the first three chapters I'd can only say one thing.
*Wow*
This story is brilliantly concieved and executed. Your gift as a story-teller is truly amazing and I can't wait for you to post the next chapter!
Meara |
 OMYSTRS 2004-03-29 . chapter 2 I LOVED YOUR SHADES OF GRAY, AND THIS IS TURNING OUT TO BE A AWESOME SEQUEL. YOU HAVE A GREAT WRITING STYLE...ALMOST LIKE I AM READING A NOVEL. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, DON'T TAKE 3 YEARS TO WRITE IT! I DON'T THINK I CAN WAIT THAT LONG! |
 Karla 2004-03-26 . chapter 2 I love your work, this story is fantastic. I can't wait to read what happens next! I took me the whole afternoon to re-read the first fic and the two chapters of the second...i loved every minute of it!:) |
 Jeshone 2004-03-26 . chapter 1 Sir, I loved Shades of Grey and I am looking forward to seeing what adventures may occur in this one, but one question is the mysterious voice a canon character or something original either way can't wait to find out what it is. |