*blinks* hey... cool...

VERY good. _ I really like your perspective!

0.0...that was sad. NARUTO! Wah. Why does such a kawaii little guy have to be so hated? Phooey...I always end up liking a hated character. Good writing! I loved it very much so!

O.O...*is speechless...dumbfounded, even*...O.O
Poor Naruto-chan...

Alright. I don't review much, but I had to review for this story since it was so well-written. Short, but you managed to keep it to-the-point which was good. And also, Naruto's current dilemma with people's reactions toward him sounds like something he would fret about. He seems paranoid here about their reactions and is constantly 'itching' for something. Oh well. Or maybe i'm just being a smarta** again. Anyway, the last line of your story was brilliant _ Espescialy this part of it:
"again he follow the tradition of destruction..."
desolate15

Wow, this is great. You write very well and I love the style of this piece. Good work.

Sometimes random stuff is better than the deeply thought-out stuff. I loved it, but that's just me. I thought the imagery was beautiful, and the writing style put alot of the other stuff I read to shame. Nifty job!