 Renom 2009-10-11 . chapter 4I'm sorry but the ending to this story was horrid. I was really enjoying it until THEY STRIPPED HARRY OF HIS IDENTITY! It just seems like a betrayal of trust to destroy everything that make's Harry Harry. He probably would have had some issues, yes, but no one had the right to take that away, remove him from his siblings...Just...ugh. |
 Cassandra30 2009-04-19 . chapter 4No!! They should have kept those children together! Oh stupid people! |
 Cassandra30 2009-04-19 . chapter 3Take the others too! Please! |
 Cassandra30 2009-04-19 . chapter 2Ok These people should never have been allowed to adopt! What was Child Protective Services thinking??
Excellent story! |
 Cassandra30 2009-04-19 . chapter 1Take the other children too. leave evidence that they abused them so they can't adopt more or fix their memories so they won't want too. Find these children loving homes! |
 hypercell 2009-02-20 . chapter 3Are we going to see Shane later in the story? Also, will the other kids still be in the story later? |
 hypercell 2009-02-20 . chapter 2Why is he at the Carltons? |
 hypercell 2009-02-20 . chapter 1it is no longer purple...It is green, and it is in the middle... |
 Make war not love. war is fun 2008-11-15 . chapter 4odd story but an interesting read |
 Lexie Lupin 2008-10-12 . chapter 4Good story. I really liked how they all ended up seeing each other again in the end, even if the didn't remember each other. Nicely done short story! |
 CosmicEssence 2008-08-01 . chapter 4Remus was especially good in this, although sweet talking the owl was a bit 'gag-enforcing'. It seemed almost not right to have them all forget each other but i suppose forgetting the horrors of the carltons is a major bonus and from the looks of it there all around each other anyway...we except Harry...I like to think he'll defy logic and remember one day. But it is nice they do seem to remember if only through 'instinct'. Real charming piece. |
 natalieisawildflower 2008-06-01 . chapter 1the buttons blue. poor harry! save him! please! |
 Morphox 2008-04-23 . chapter 4Wow!! That was amazing! It was really sad and i loved the bit about remus holding harry! I love it when harry doens't trust someone and then gets worked up over things.
If anyone knows a story similar to this please send it to me! Appreciated!!
Morphox X |
 Angelauthor14 2008-04-23 . chapter 4Brilliant! |
 MC2456 2007-08-20 . chapter 4I LOVE IT! :) |