Reviews for Jay's Drabbles
Wrath Flamesoul 6/30/12 . chapter 28
The fact that you (unknowingly, of course) used the name of a classmate who used to tease me a lot made this impossibly funnier. XD
Wrath Flamesoul 6/30/12 . chapter 25
My nose won't stop bleeding - and yet at the same time I feel so dirty for reading this one! XD
Wrath Flamesoul 6/30/12 . chapter 22
I think Elladan is the one...hurt, and Elrohir is the one tending to him. I don't know why I think that, I just have this sense that it's Elladan in trouble. Not dying - I think he's close to beginning to come around - but maybe he got hit with one too many poisoned arrows, and Elrohir's tending him back...back in Imladris, I think.

I think they must have been returning home after a patrol or something like that, only they were ambushed by a stray band of orcs, and Elladan's been out of it for a day or two. But I think he makes it - he can't just leave his little brother behind, after all!
Wrath Flamesoul 8/7/11 . chapter 47
This chapter made me cry! I love the way you explore Elrohir and Elladan's characters - in all of your stories!
Ellfine 1/20/06 . chapter 47
Made me cry. I like my twins as a set. I'm sad you split them up - even for a drabble. *off to get some tissues*
Ellfine 12/3/05 . chapter 46
THat was too cute! Very unexpected ending and too cute!
JastaElf 12/2/05 . chapter 46
LOL! Oh that was wonderful... what a cute idea, to make us think until the last line that it was something dark and deadly and awful... I laughed out loud!

:-) Thanks for a fun read!
KittiMarlowe 11/11/05 . chapter 45
There's an amazing sense of magic in your stories, in the style and character of your writing. I like the nature of these drabbles, short and succint, very self-contained.

Keep writing. We anticipate.

Kit.
JastaElf 11/9/05 . chapter 45
Oh, that's lovely... *sighs happily* I love it when Legolas is given a chance to show his Elvishness! Especially in a canon manner! :-)

Thanks for this lovely drabble!
JastaElf 10/5/05 . chapter 44
Oh, that is so lovely... nice little twist that the object of Thranduil's focus is a game of hide and seek with his Elfling! :-)

Drabbles bemuse me; I want to write them, but trying to say so much in so few words seems a daunting task. That is one of the reasons why I am so glad that you write them so well... :-)

Thank you for this lovely birthday gift!
KittiMarlowe 9/8/05 . chapter 43
this is lovely, all of them are. of course, 42 nand 43 are a little creepy, but i'm certain this what elrond would have been thinking.
ellfine 8/13/05 . chapter 43
how very sad. well done! you're right if one twin died, the other would soon follow. nicely described from elrond's' perspective.
Ceyxa 6/9/05 . chapter 42
Very interesting plot twist. Spooky, but very believable.
othrilis 5/1/05 . chapter 40
cool
Flashgriffin 4/12/05 . chapter 39
Aw... It may be short, but it sure is cute. I like stories of little elves, and this one is no exception.
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