I love this story so much! :D Your characterization of all the characters is amazing, and your OCs are awesome! Keep up the good work and can't wait to see what the next chapter brings! :D

“Housekeeping!”

“** damn it all!” Wes swore harshly.

Favorite part so far

this one is really good and i would realy love to see it updated. please? cuz you haven't udated since 06...

Good story. It's very interesting. Keep up the good work.

There was silence for several long moments, a mixture of shock and disbelief.

Then—

“…I still say Phenac’s closer.”

“Shut up.”

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NOW THAT WAS HILARIOUS. xD
*cough* *cough*
Anyways. I noticed you havent updated in like ... Two years ...
And I was just curious if you were going to update soon cause I love this story to bits. :3 Literally. I also love WesRui. And the Humor and Pokebattles you create. Its awesome and amazing. :3
So if you update Ill be so happy. If you dont, Ill cry. xD So I beg of you please update this total awesome story. *smile smile*
xD

I really like this story please continue

this is like the perfect novelization of a video game. you captured Wes and Rui exactly as i pictured them and the story is artfully told.

very nice.

if you get a chance, please check out my story: Saga of the Storm.

No comments yet. I named the main characters Seth and Yuki.

such a sexy story, especially wes' and rui's awkward moments lol. i hope you can update soon.

I'm addicted =o After I finish typing up this review I'm going to go read the other one.. Bound to a Dragon's Heart? or something like that. I love your writing, and the idea of rewriting the game's story is quite interesting. And and I like swords. And poor Travis. And I love Cail. Even though he's sort of spineless in my fic.

I hope you update it soon. It's a very good story.
:)

Update soon please! You can't end this story like this!

Oops. Looks like I completely skipped chapter 5. Weird. I didn't even notice.

Well, I like how you put Cail into the story. I've always had some liking of the guy... And he's got a girlfriend, or at least I think she's his girlfriend.

True, there is a lot of mystery in this story, but that's what makes it interesting. I kind of like it when the author sort of slowly puts it all together, but not in a confusing way. I think you're doing a pretty good job with that.

I liked the seen between Sierra and Rui; I kind of like Sierra's character. It's kind of fun to put your own characters in stories, you know?

I also liked the small scene between Wes and his pokemon. It's so sweet how they think he's worth something when nobody else does. And now Rui thinks that too, of course. ;)

And it makes sense how they would get to know each other better. Everyone needs to have some fun now and then.

Geez, I feel sorry for Rui and Wes AGAIN. I'm pretty sure they'll make up, but still...

True, Nascour was really scary in the game. And he's still scary because... he just is. He scares me. And so does Miror B., but I think he scares everyone.

Okay, random thoughts again, but I like how you say "thank Lugia" instead of "thank God". It just adds to the "pokemonish" atmosphere. I think I've seen that in a few fics, except all sorts of legendaries are used, like Celibi or something.

And nice song for the chapter, by the way. I love Linkin Park, and it totally fits.