I like how you described that scene where Kawamura took the power shot to protect Fuji. You did it accurately.

It's also good to read about what happened after the end of Episode 20.

Hot. *fans self* Hope you write more TakaFuji. ^-^

Yeah, TakaFuji pairing story. I love this, especially with Taka being the Seme in this. *grins and puts it into her new C2 "The Burning Pair"* Hope you decide to visit this pairing again.

*o* *o* I love you ! TakaFuji is one of my favourite pairings ! I'm so happy to have found a so cute fanfic about them ! *hugs* Thank you very much ^_^

^^ Heh heh... this is one of my favorite pairings... and uunfortunately, there aren't enough of them on **sigh**
As for the actual writing, it was done very well. Hee hee, Taka's reactions. Fuji's actions... -^_^- He is a sexy god, ne?

Hm... I've never been a huge FujiTaka fan, but this fic was really nice. I like the way Fuji perceived Taka, how he was interested into him due to his 'moments of intensity'. It always seems hard to put the two together since Taka-san seems so naive and shy and Fuji is well...^^;; But you did a really nice job of it here. Gambatte!

Cute... and unusual.. very weird...

Some slightly trite lines, but I'm happy to see a pairing that I've always thought very very plausible! ^_^ Overall well-written and enjoyable. Thanks for sharing!

Ah, I'm not the biggest FujiTaka fan, but...it was nice. I like the way it was written.