Interesting portrayal!

I liked the story, especially the believable characters and end. Not the usual "all is good" but mistrust towards Snape even now and Luna pressed to chose between Love and School. Very nice story.

You made some reference to supporting gay/lesbians etc. Yet in your description of Luna(at times) you made a mockery of those who have mental problems. I did not see a rider or apology in regards to this. Do for one what you have done for the other-people with mental problems have feelings too

Aweee I'm happy for Severus. It took a while for the story to actually progress, but it seemed to move at a realistic pace. I for one enjoyed it. (:

keep up the good work,

A Happy American Nose Picker

ps. i haven't picked my nose since i was five so aha! :p

Awwww it was lovely! :) and so deep

i know it says complete but i dont think it is! it really was a great storie and i wish it had been continued! great storie it was really really a good read!

Cheers

AJ

Is it completed? Because at the end of the last chapter posted it says TBC, but the sotry says its completed. Did you leave this story? :[

Woah. Man I NEVER expected that. Okay. Here is a list of what I thought it really was. The deep dark secret of Henry Lovegood that is:

1. At first I thought he was cheating on her [with her best friend or something]

2. Then I thought he was a death eater

3. Then I thought he was some sort of criminal [i.e. child molester or a convict rapist; this was actually the one I thought was most likely LOL]

4. Finally I reverted to the thought that he was cheating on her.

P.S. I guess I was half right, haha.

That was CUTE...I love it

Is ANYONE Frikin' CRYING! 'Cause...I AM!...SERIOUSLY! 10/10 on this chapter. BRAVO SWEETIE!

With the whole dating thing...that made my eyes teary I ACTAULLY CRIED! I LOVE IT!

I just finished reading the chapter about everyone finding Ginny in Snaps bedroom! LMAO I think i woke up the whole house and almost ped in my pants lol GENIUS!

At first I though eww Snap and Luna (I never read teacher/student pairings) but I kept reading and even though some of the dialogue was awkward I still liked it

lol and then I got to this chapter and I have to say PURE GENIUS! lololol

I've been reading your story for God knows how long by now, and the two things I've noticed it that Luna seems to have had many a relationship, and you always spelled 'then' as 'than'. I had to mentally edit that, or read it with some kind of heavy accent. Heehee.

I've always imagined Severus a paiter, I think everyone has. Luna, as everyone knows, it's loony and it's amazing how well you make this work out. Honestly, it is. However, your grammar, or lack their of, annoies (God, I can't spell!) me more than I can truely, properly, say. Rawr.

Do you mind if I copy/paste your story into Miscrosoft Word and do the editing for you? It's killing me.

I would Love to read a Sequel!

*smile*

well, i was going to wait until the end of the story to review, but after the last couple chapters i've decided to review now...

i really like this story and i can't wait till you finish!

you seem to consistantly make some spelling errors such as to/too and were/where and a few others...if you would fix those mistakes, it would greatly improve your fic

lastly, i really don't like how you handled the awkward situation in chapter 24 (i think that's the chapter) how Severus yelled "becuse i love her!". it was very un-severus-like and could have been substituted with some veritisum (spelling?) potion. it would have been easily acessed because he is the potions master, everyone wouldn't have found out in such a way, and luna wouldn't have to quit hogwarts.

the little scene during breakfast with the obvious affection towards each other is bothering me too! that isn't what severus would do at all!

but all in all, i still really love your story and i can't wait for the next chapter!

p.s. i laughed so hard when everyone walked in to a severus-shirt-clad luna with boxer lokking shorts- too good! lol.

p.p.s. woot for the luna/severus ship! (my favorite)