A great story. Very good.

I kinda like all these short little explanation stories... they're short and easy to write but you wrote them very well and they're fun to read.

Well written.

*sniffle* that's just beautiful

YaY!Pretty piece. ^_^

Brilliant! That was short and sweet. I understand about that bit concerning Harry's wife. So everyone is dead...kinda made me cry. Your oneshot made me kind of think of them as real people...the feelings described through the words...oh gosh! I must be freaking you out, huh? Yeah, I do that to people. Anyway, love the oneshot! Love Betrayal...you know, all that jazz! LOL!
-Kristina

Very very moving.

I am very glad that you gave in to the demand to write the piece. I suspect you mean a muse demand rather than reader demand. I know that feeling very well...sometimes something just has to be written.

I like the idea that only Harry could contribute memories of Fawkes and Sirius. Very sad and a touching reminder of the fact that Sirius was still a fugitive when he had fallen.

I think though that the saddest part had to be that only one of the twins survived...somehow I find that more heartbreaking than if they had both died. *sniff*

that wa so beautiful that line about hermione looking up from the book really got to me. I loved it and started crying

wow...just wow. Incredibly well-written, very powerful. I love how you made it so touching without bordering tacky...you made it seem so real. Just plain amazing.

That brought tears to my eyes. You got me with "He ran his fingers over Hermione’s name and saw her look up from a book to laugh at something." A touching and effectively told story.

Just to clear things up on my story, the Ministry gave her permission to use magic. It's not like it's iMPOSSiBLE for the Ministry to give someone permission, so please try to use imagination.

I feel weird... i was laughing a few minutes ago and now i'm crying!
Brilliantly written... powerful, simple and complex... just *cries*

I kinda guessed it was Luna. I really liked this it was so powerful and sad, I can't really bring words to describe how great I thought it was
Kristina

Maybe I do cry at nearly every thing I read, but I think that I was moved to tears for a good reason after reading this. The bit about his memory of Hermione especially got me going. I commend you, at the same time I say shame on you, for making me upset. Very good peice of work. I also look forward to the next instalment of Betrayed.

Touching cookie, found it peaceful and good by itself.