I LOVE THIS STORY ! BUT ANYHOO MAYBE YOU COULD KEEP ON WRITING? I LOVE THE HIEI BOTON PAIR UP!
TOODELS
opps sorry i left the capslock on!and for getting carried away with exclamation marks!sorry!

i like it... cant wait till next chapter

lol...I like the hair thing! My friend says Hiei looks like a pineapple! lol

Great story, and definetly make more chapters it's worth every little bit so keep up the great work and make more chapters! :)