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HappyMe-O
2009-11-25 . chapter 6
Awh I just cant stop reading this story! Poor Kakkarott! I hope he gets healed!

I cant wait to read what happens next. I really am enjoying the fic!

-Goes to next chapter-
HappyMe-O
2009-11-25 . chapter 3
Little Kakkarott is so cute! I love him! The five year old and as a baby.

And Vegeta taking care of him soo cute!

I realy am enjoying the story so far. It is something diffret I msut saya nd At first I wasnt sure if I'd like it but so far I do!

-on tot he enxt chapter-
HappyMe-O
2009-11-25 . chapter 1
I like this! I like this a lot so far. I ant wait when Kakkarot/Goku comes into the puicture. -gos onto the next chapter-
Zofonik
2008-06-19 . chapter 23
What an awesome story. I love stories set on Planet Vegeta.

This was highly unusual and I don't often like incest stories but this one was just right. You made the reader believe they should be together.

Loved the situations you put them in, Vegeta's reluctant acceptance of his love for his son, betrayel by Raditz, the helplessness when the Saiyans revolted.

Also loved the last chapter on earth.

Bravo!
Saere
2008-06-12 . chapter 23
Hee. Great story!
Saere
2008-06-12 . chapter 1
I immensely enjoyed your other V/G story, but this one already looks much more interesting, and better written. Thanks for writing!
Emeralden Rapley
2007-04-08 . chapter 23
i read it and i give it on a sclae from 1 to 10 hm i give it a 100.!

XD.


ja-ne
Emeralden Rapley
2007-01-06 . chapter 3
i like it so far. if goku is vegeta's son does vegita... nevermind i think ill read because my head hurts from the the link of qeustion. u when they ask qeustions that link like uum for example: so if i ur my dad, and he my dad but he's my brother than im the son of my uncle. yea those qeustions make my head hurt so i'll just read. i dont think vageta is gonna knowingly fall in love with his son. but im loving it so far.
Emeralden Rapley
2007-01-06 . chapter 1
i love it alot. im gonna read more i hope there's a happy ending.
cherry fantasy
2006-10-14 . chapter 23
Well, this was VERY unconventional... But you know what ? I totally LOVED it ! ^.^ It was beautifully written, very deep and touching. I liked every single part of it ! ^-^ It was an amazing mix of angst and romance, you did an absolutely awesome job ! I thought the plot was very original and very well developped, I would even dare say flawless ! ^_~ It was a pleasure to read, believe me.

Well, keep up the great work, and take care ! ^^
Kokoro
2006-05-29 . chapter 23
Sigh. So adorable. I wish you still had the desire to write more V/G fics. I can't help but want to come back to all of yours and reread them!
Kokoro
2006-05-28 . chapter 8
Yes, I am re-reading this =) It's so adorable. I did, however, catch this mistake :

Kami, the boy was just fifteen.

Isn't he sixteen, since the trip to the Immortality Goddess lasted a year?

In any case, I still love this story.
SesshomaruFan552014
2006-05-16 . chapter 23
Wow loved it. Great story!
Silvermane1
2006-04-03 . chapter 11
cool
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2006-02-10 . chapter 23
lol i love it ,i finaly got to read the rest of :O)
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